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Not Under or Around by ~AkiraSamiri:iconAkiraSamiri:



When the walls fell I
picked up each one and you
weren't there.  I checked in
every closet and around the
door frames and not a sign.
I looked in each tub and cabinet
and even the oven and not a trace
I checked between all the
pillows and blankets and
not a hair.  Did you already
know everything was
collapsing and run?
Did you plan your escape
figuring I couldn't prevent
a thing?  Or did you just not
want me to find you?
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trying to regain my touch in hopes of lyrics developing easier...

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:icon3wyl:
It's a bit uneven and choppy in terms of words and such, but I do like the questions you raise...

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:iconakirasamiri:
yea...it was prose but i didn't wanna do it in standard paragraph structure...lol

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Akira Samiri
:iconsillygoosefrompluto:
a little late, lol, but i like it. :] the theme is great

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"Like when your stomache makes funny sounds in class: What body function makes THAT noise??"
:iconakirasamiri:
hungry...

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Akira Samiri
:iconsillygoosefrompluto:
???
lol

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"Like when your stomache makes funny sounds in class: What body function makes THAT noise??"
:iconwarzonestoic:
all things change, and all
things are impermanent.

i love this poem.
:iconakirasamiri:
thanks a lot. a piece that slipped my mind.

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Akira Samiri

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